A big thanks to everyone who responded to Thursday's News Gems post about the best describers in American newspapers with suggestions of more great writers. (And our apologies to everyone who tried to leave a comment but couldn't; we're working on getting the comment function fixed). Here are some of the nominations we received from our readers:
Rosemary Parrillo recommends Amy Ellis Nutt, who works with her at The Star-Ledger in Newark, N.J. Parrillo says "Nutt uses exceptional descriptive writing and analogies to elucidate some of the most complex issues in science today." The following passage is from the third story in a science series called "Picturing the Past":
He had looked through the photographs on the computer one by one and still remembered little. Not the walk through the winding streets of this medieval university town, or the restaurants where they'd eaten, or the wooden boats floating down the river Cam.
It had all taken place just a couple of weeks earlier, but the Alzheimer's patient had barely a shadow of a memory.
Gradually, though, some of the images stirred a feeling of remembrance, a few fragments here and there. And then one of the images stirred something else. It was a photograph taken inside King's College Chapel, showing its soaring, 80-foot-high ceiling, with the densely latticed fan vaults bathed in the warm butterscotch light of a winter afternoon.
The Alzheimer's patient remembered something, and what he remembered was a thought, as ephemeral as the sunshine momentarily caught in the ceiling's stony web.
"This should be one of the Seven Wonders of the World," he said to the doctor by his side.
A 500-year-old chapel, a photograph, a fleeting thought -- somewhere deep in the dying folds of the man's brain, bits of memory spilled out like presents from an attic closet: the walk, the restaurant, lunch with his doctor. The memory was still there. http://blog.nj.com/ledgerarchives/2007/12/snapshots_of_memory_saved_in_a.html
Tim Henderson is a fan of Nicholas Spangler at the Miami Herald. In this scene from "A Great Place for Special K Lovers to Wait," Spangler is waiting with fellow reporter Hussein Kadhim at a military base in Iraq:
We sat on metal chairs in an air-conditioned trailer with fake wood paneling on the walls and a dozen bored soldiers around us. A security officer nixed our efforts to record this glimpse of reality on film for the folks back home: No photographs are permitted in the waiting room, he said.
Hussein immediately began to read a months-old article about self-esteem in Self magazine.
The dinginess of the place, and the drowsiness, made it feel like an out-of-the-way Trailways bus station, except that everybody was carrying an assault rifle and there were free snacks.
Before you get to thinking how good American fighting men and women have it in Iraq, realize that there was only one variety of snack: Special K cereal in one-portion plastic cups. There was an infinite supply of these, along with napkins and tiny plastic spoons, but no milk. www.miamiherald.com/news/world/story/635768.html
The Los Angeles Times' Joe Mozingo also received a nomination. At the start of "In His Old South Los Angeles Neighborhood, Big Mike's the Man," Mozingo introduces us to Michael Cummings, a former gangbanger who is now a Pentecostal minister, tow-truck driver and peacemaker:
Big Mike hitches up in front of Jordan High School in Watts like a bull snuffling for trouble.
He scans the stoops down Juniper Street. He peers in the windows of passing cars. And he keeps a firm eye on the three chain-link gates of the Jordan Downs housing project down the block. ...
Cummings is a tow-truck driver, Pentecostal pastor and former Grape Street Crip. He is as imposing as a defensive tackle and wields absolute respect in the neighborhood where he grew up. Parents adore him. Gangbangers listen to him.
No one messes with Big Mike. www.latimes.com/news/local/la-me-bigmike28-2008jun28,0,6347758.story
Tony C. Yang nominates the work of his former mentor at the Chicago Tribune, James Janega, who has a knack for reporting from places few people go. In this passage from "Underwater, a Disturbing New World," Janega describes the bottom of Lake Michigan, where invasive species are taking over:
The changes are easy to see. From 20 deep feet of water out to 40 feet or more, mussels cover the lake floor in a crunching layer as brittle as breakfast cereal. On their shells fronds of algae wave in the water, forming a carpet the lush green of a tropical forest. Darting sand-colored gobies complete the picture.
The Tribune makes readers pay for stories after 30 days, but when this one's no longer available you can do a search of Janega's name for more good work. www.chicagotribune.com/features/lifestyle/green/chi-great-lakes-invasives_30jul30,0,5835308.story
Do you know of other masters of description out there? Send your nominations to newsgems@sbcglobal.net.